Monday, March 23, 2009

THE SECRET

IT WAS MY BEST FRIEND’S DEEPEST DARKEST SECRET AND IT WOULD BE A HARD ONE TO KEEP. IT MY BEST FRIEND NAME KARLA WE KNOW EACH OTHER FOR 8 YEARS NOW SO WE MADE A PROMISE THAT WE WILL TELL EACH OTHER EVER THING. SO WE START TO TELLING EACH OTHER ARE SECRETS. TWO DAY A GO SHE HAD A BLACK EYE AND I SK HER WHAT HAPPEN SHE SAID SHE FELL DOWN THE STEP BUT I KNEW SHE WAS LYING BECAUSE I CAN SEE IT ON HER FACE SO I SAID I KNEW YOUR LYING TELL ME WHAT HAPPEN SHE SAID A MAN BEAT ME UP FOR MY MONEY I SAY YO MONEY SHE SAY YEA.SHE SAY I A PROSTITUTE I SAY WHAT SHE SAY I'M A PROSTITUTE SAY HOW LONG THIS BEEN GOING ON SENS I WAS 11YEARS OLD AND HAVE NOT TOLD ME. SHE SAY THAT HOW I MAKE MY MONEY. THAT I WAYS HAVE NEW THINGS. I DO LIKE DOING A I DO LIKE DOING IT. NO BODY KNOWS BUT CAN YOU KEEP THAT FOR ME I TRUST YOU WITH THIS DEEP SECRET DON’T KNOW WHAT SHOULD DO I WANT TO TELL SOME ONE THAT CAN HELP HER CAUSE SHE STARTING TO LIKE A LITTLE TO MUCH.

4 comments:

  1. Kanii great work i like your story it was very exciting i like the creativity you had with your story keep up the good work kanii

    Tony

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  2. i dont get this story abotu karla but this is funny lol pratitute or wat ever that is lol XD

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  3. I liked your story and specially how you start it.

    You should include more details on how it happen and your story would be better.
    *Dalia*

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  4. iTSz NiCE i liKE iT BUt liKE DAliA SAiD iNClUDE MORE DETAilS TO MAKE iT MORE lONGER iT WAS GOOD THO =] NiCE WORk


    -HoNEyCoMBz

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