It time for dinner mom call us in me and my two brothers. I don’t know what we are eating but it smell really good. When we went in the table was sent up. Mom said go wash your hands. I wasn’t ready to eat but it smell really good but I wanted to go back in play with my brother Jim he was ready to eat he love to eat. Then it the little brother name Joe. He stayed in the with mom because he was only 3 years old. Mom a Nana stay in clean on make sure everything ok. Dad goes out in work in the morning to dinner then go back out to work. He work on the railroad. We also have to pet Lovev the dog and Cristal the horse. Then its me Anna im the middle child. I love to play out said. Mom food is good but I be into playing I don’t want to eat. my Nana love to net she makes ever thing.
Well let me get more into my family. We are a very happy family we get a long very will. We have 2 bed room me, Jim and, Nana. Nana stay up in the dark rocking in the rocking chair netting and looking out the window. She love to help out around the house. we have a little place where we grow are food but its not a farm. We can have a farm because mom think its to much. She think she have a lot all ready. I told her I will help her but I guess not. She don’t want us doing nothing around the house. I am 5 year and my older brother is 6 years old. We go to school down the road. It not very far ones you get the hang of it. Mom watch us walk to school. We have to hold hand all the way there. We is very close well tell each other ever thing even a deep dark secret. My little brother don’t go to school because he is to little. we go out said after we are done with a home work in change are clothes. We help each other with a homework. After that ever things done we go to sleep and do the same thin but something different to eat.
Well let me get more into my family. We are a very happy family we get a long very will. We have 2 bed room me, Jim and, Nana. Nana stay up in the dark rocking in the rocking chair netting and looking out the window. She love to help out around the house. we have a little place where we grow are food but its not a farm. We can have a farm because mom think its to much. She think she have a lot all ready. I told her I will help her but I guess not. She don’t want us doing nothing around the house. I am 5 year and my older brother is 6 years old. We go to school down the road. It not very far ones you get the hang of it. Mom watch us walk to school. We have to hold hand all the way there. We is very close well tell each other ever thing even a deep dark secret. My little brother don’t go to school because he is to little. we go out said after we are done with a home work in change are clothes. We help each other with a homework. After that ever things done we go to sleep and do the same thin but something different to eat.
Your story its nice you explained their lifes.
ReplyDeleteBut I think you should put more details like who was that man or what they were doing in the table besised eating..
*Dalia*
yea what dalia said you need to put more deatil but it was a good story but i saw like 3 setences i didnt get
ReplyDeletei liked your work alot keep up the good work kanii it was preety good you just have to add more details and it would be a great story nice effort..
ReplyDeleteTony!!!
i like your story =]
ReplyDeleteKANii GOOD jOB GiRL.!
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